Posted: January 5, 2010 in Haikus
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These are some haikus that i wrote:


the snow is falling

landing softly on the ground

but its not stopping

rusty old pickup:

the rusty pickup

is still there in the driveway

its never moving

  1. Mrs, Steadly says:

    haiku I don’t understand. Is there supposed to be continuity of meaning attached to the phrases? Mrs. S

  2. suki(poop) says:

    i dont think so as long as its beautiful and written by my bf (yep she is)

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