Tangled Web of TV

Posted: January 16, 2010 in Nature

This is a poem i wrote  in Language Arts…i used different slogans for different companies. you’ll recognize a few as you read:

Hello? can you hear me now?

Or are you to caught up in a tangled web of  TV?

If i were to look inside your head,

i would see brillant flashing light of commercials,

and catchy jingles.

Things like,

Milk chocolate that melts in your mouth and not your hand.

That maybe important,

but who needs a snack that smiles back?

Is is really necessary to live on the coke side of life?

I need you up off the couch,

where you don’t live a little,

you live a lotto,

you should be lovin’ the real world,

not a commercial for McDonalds.

And becuase sprite tells you to obey your thirst,

you should get up and get yourself a drink, instead of staying




                                                                                                                                                                                         couch like a couch potatoe

Maybe change out of your Pajamas 

go play an hour a day.

Wanna think it over with twix?

just call 1-800- get-a-life

That was easy, wasn’t it?

  1. Sarahsmom says:

    THis is great!

    Love it!

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